The table gives information about five types of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010, 2012 and 2014

The table gives information about five types of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010, 2012 and 2014
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table gives information about five types of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010, 2012 and 2014
The table demonstrates 5 categories of
vehicles
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registered in Australia in 2010, 2012 and 2014. In general, the
number
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of
vehicles
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had
the
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steady forward trend, with the figures
of
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for
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passenger
vehicles
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was
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the highest and light
trucks
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were
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the lowest. In 2010, the
number
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of passenger
vehicles
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registered was 11,8
millions
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million
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, approximately 5 times higher than commercial
vehicles
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, at 2.3 million. The figure
of
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for
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motorcycles and heavy
trucks
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,
on the other hand
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, was significantly lower, at only 540,000 and 384,000
while
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the figure relating to light
trucks
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was the lowest, at just 106,000. As is presented in the table, in the
next
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four-year period, the
number
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of passenger
vehicles
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and commercial
vehicles
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grew dramatically to 13 million and 2,7
millions
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million
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. During the same period, the figure
of
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for
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motorcycles and heavy
trucks
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rocketed by 30,8% and 23,5%.
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, the
number
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of heavy
trucks
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rose at the smallest rate, at 8,3%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words vehicles, number, trucks with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • trends
  • registration
  • vehicles
  • comparison
  • categories
  • growth
  • decline
  • significant
  • increase
  • decrease
  • surge
  • consistent
  • pattern
  • speculate
  • factors
  • economic conditions
  • consumer preferences
  • advancements
  • technology
  • implications
  • infrastructure
  • environment
  • societal behaviors
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