These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

The issue of future profession has always aroused heated debates among graduates from linguistic faculties. According to the statistics a small fraction of alumni in the modern society
choose
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chooses
teaching at secondary schools.
This
essay will discuss the main problems associated with pedagogue’s career and propose some possible solutions to avoid them. It is common knowledge in the highly technological world
adults not
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adults, not
only have serious difficulties with their kids’
upbringing but
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upbringing, but
also
treat educators as attendants to their youngsters. Community’s attitude toward teachers has dramatically changed as humans started to associate the latters with service staff.
Firstly
, contemporary pupils are convinced by mothers and fathers of their dominant role at
school
in any situation.
For instance
, a boy behaves disgustingly at the lesson and a conflict occurs between
this
child and a teacher. When solving the problem at the headmaster’s office no one tries to consider teacher’s viewpoint whilst parents insist on son’s innocence. So does the principal and the only person to blame is the teacher.
Secondly
, nowadays money plays the most crucial role and the majority of wealthy human beings are confident they are able to teach children without any motivation and aspiration.
For example
, once at the parent meeting I was asked whether it was possible to cover all unsatisfactory marks with a certain amount of money.
Hence
, parents are eager to cope with the generation gap which exists between them and their kids at the expense of teachers’ reputation and merit. Despite misunderstanding between parents and teachers is gaining momentum, they shouldn’t underestimate the
opportunities academics
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opportunities, academics
possess which can be used to manage with the trouble.
First
and foremost, the government is expected to redefine schoolmasters’ importance in the social environment as well as their pay level. Within the frame of
this
approach worldwide politics vote for
school
workers’ salary increase.
For instance
,
official income
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an official income
of a teacher in our
school
enhanced twice in comparison with 2010. States try to improve
financial stability
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the financial stability
of
this
sphere.
On the other hand
,
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
unions intensify their impact on tutors’ confidence and provide
school
specialists with protection.
For example
, my colleague received defence from
education community
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the education community
in a controversial situation she faced with and became grateful for the support.
Thus
, teachers start realizing their importance and relevance in
educational process
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the educational process
. All things considered, the obvious conclusion to be drawn is that
today
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today's
teachers remain an inalienable part of children’s lives.
Although
population
talk
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talks
about technical facilities which gradually replace some teachers’ functions yet families need qualified specialists who can help overcome the stage of youth’s personal formation. Every country has possibilities to create
productive environment
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a productive environment
for academic personnel in order to let them feel confident, efficient and optimistic. Only
such
atmosphere can persuade students to get involved in teaching.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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