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My name is Samuel Finn and I am writing regarding the upcoming

seminar

to be held in Toronto, Canada in November

this

year. I work as a senior executive in a pharmaceutical company and the content of

this

seminar

will provide me with the expert knowledge necessary for my role. As I live in Australia and it will be an overseas trip for me, I would like some

further

information about the

seminar

such

as the duration of the

seminar

(including the exact dates), and whether or not the agenda for each day and the speakers are different.

Also

, as I am looking for some inexpensive accommodation close to the

seminar

venue, it would be very helpful if you could suggest some options.

Lastly

, I would like to get some information on

seminar

fees, as well as the typical costs of meals and travel in Toronto. My company will be paying for these,

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I need to prepare an estimate in order to get approval to participate in the

seminar

. I am planning to finalise the details of my trip soon and it would be great if you could help me with my queries at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Samuel Finn

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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You would like to take admission at the college. Write a letter to the program coordinator in charge of the course and ask for detailed information on the deadline dates, the program, the accommodation.

The Greeting

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

Some people work for the same organisation for a lifetime. Others think it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that what children watch on television influences their behavior, while others say the amount of time children spend watching television influences their behavior. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many young people today spend too much time following the latest fashion trends in areas such as clothing and technology. Do the advantages of this trend outweight the drawbacks?

In some places old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+