There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Tanuja Mistry,
residents
of Vasant Vihar Colony, Central Delhi. I am writing Fix the agreement mistake
resident
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with the bus
services of
our area.
Change preposition
in
To begin
with, we have least
buses available for Correct article usage
the least
this
area, and it arrives often 10 to 15 minutes late, and due to their late arrival crowd increases and two buses
Add a comma
,buses
people
are riding same
Change the article
the same
bus
. It causes overfull situation some people
like old age people
, people
with children and some children are not able to manage
get in the Add the particle
tomanage
bus
, consequently
they urge to leave the Add a comma
,consequently
bus
.
Due to this
situation, I missed my bus
more than 10 times and unable
to reach my office on time and my salary got deducted. I am distress Add a missing verb
was unable
with
Change preposition
by
this
situation as I can not commute Correct quantifier usage
any other
other
way like Change the wording
another
train
or taxi, as it cost me a lot.
I believe Correct article usage
a train
this
matter deserves your immediate. I would appreciate if
you could increase Correct pronoun usage
it if
number
Correct article usage
the number
buses
in our area.
Looking forward Change preposition
of buses
for
your prompt action.
Yours Sincerely,
TanujaChange the preposition
to
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