There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am Tanuja Mistry,

residents

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of Vasant Vihar Colony, Central Delhi. I am writing

this

letter to express my dissatisfaction with the

bus

services

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our area.

To begin

with, we have

least

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the least

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buses available for

this

area, and it arrives often 10 to 15 minutes late, and due to their late arrival crowd increases and two

buses

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people

are riding

same

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bus

. It causes overfull situation some

people

like old age

people

with children and some children are not able to

manage

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get in the

bus

consequently

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they urge to leave the

bus

. Due to

this

situation, I missed my

bus

more than 10 times and

unable

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to reach my office on time and my salary got deducted. I am distress

with

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this

situation as I can not commute

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any other

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other

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another

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way like

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or taxi, as it cost me a lot. I believe

this

matter deserves your immediate. I would appreciate

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it if

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you could increase

number

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the number

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buses

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of buses

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in our area. Looking forward

for

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your prompt action. Yours Sincerely, Tanuja

Tue Apr 21 2020

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2Word repetition
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8 paragraphs

173 words

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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