Prison is the best punishment for criminals. How far do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As you say
prison
is the best way to punish criminals but how far is that enough though? People how comets a murder or something bad as
crime
Suggestion
the crime
they deserve
prison
for life for what they did, but we have
also
people how comets something wrong but they don't deserve
prison
.
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.
However they
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However, their
However their
western governments have new
ideas new
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ideas, new
thing for those people with small crimes they have a good plan for that, they sing those people into volunteering work and work they can learn bunch of thing like respect other people and accept other people. And they made a special decision for
pepole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
with
anger
issues those people are a bit dangerous for
pepole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
who
objective case of "who" ("who" is also often used in the objective)
whom
they live and contact with, the government made special camp's to join and to learn how you control your
anger
in danger moments. When you finish
this
course you are
know
in the historical present; at this point in the narration of a series of past events
now
appeal to control your own
anger
and make a
differences
Suggestion
difference
to
what
Suggestion
what's
going to happen, I believe
this
is a great way to trade
pepole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
with
anger
issues and don't let them go to
prison
for small things they have done when they was under
anger
control so
this
is a great opportunity for
safe community
Suggestion
a safe community
safe communities
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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