Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

In the modern world, it is argued by some authorities and politicians that using of the
car
has been increasing dramatically for thirty years and it causes a traffic problem in most of the big cities. I strongly believe
this
statement and
this
essay will examine the proofs of and how to tackle
this
issue.
First
of all, the population around the world has increased rapidly in the
last
century, especially after the
second
world war.
However
, a huge amount of people has emigrated from rural areas to big cities and it causes overpopulation. Due to lack of infrastructure
system
, individuals have preferred to have a private
car
. The number of motor ownership has increased by 300% in the
last
decade as per the World Bank.
For instance
, before and after working hours it would be impossible to use a public
transportation
system
since people have to wait around one hour to get into a bus or subway.
That is
the reason why citizens tend to have an auto even if they are aware of the traffic jam around the city. So, governments have to ask a question themselves that even if many metropolitan cities have a public
transportation
system
, why individuals prefer to use the automobile? When we look at the answer, I believe that governments should take some restriction to prevent an increasing number of
car
ownership.
Firstly
, there should be another city tax, which ensures if a
car
enters the central zone, the owner has to pay a fee.
For instance
, especially at the time before and after working hours which are likely 8-9 am and 6-7 pm, the fees of bridges, roads, or parking areas have to be increased by governments or municipalities.
Moreover
, the authorities have to increase the ratio of the investment of the infrastructure projects and guarantee that public
transportation
is cheaper, faster and most importantly more quality.
For instance
, if a person could be able to reach its office by subway, there would no need his
car
. In conclusion, in the light of the information given above, even if there are some proven causes of the people to use their
car
, it should not be forgotten that if governments raise the quality of public
transportation
system
and set some penalties, citizens would benefit those systems.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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