Write a letter to a friend who lives in a different city. a. Tell him/her about your recent job offer b. Tell him/her about your arrangement of a dinner to celebrate your achievement c. Inform him/her about the arrangement of his/her accommodation

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Dear Priya, How are you? Hope

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letter bring you good health. I would like to share my happiness with you about my new job. I got a job offer from Oracle corporation, California two days before. I had my interview with

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lead and human resource manager

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month and I was waiting for my result.

Finally

, I got my update and offer letter on 22nd April, Thursday and was selected for the post

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administrator and I need to join the company on 1st June. I would like to celebrate

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achievement with you as you know how much interest I’ve to join

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firm. So, I booked a table in Hilton hotel in Sharjah for coming Saturday to have

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dinner and to celebrate

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success.

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, they have some live

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which you like most to watch and

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I planned for that too. I know that you are free on Saturday and Sunday and you can start by Friday evening from Abu Dhabi and you can reach Sharjah early morning. I booked

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for you in

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so that you can take some rest. Hope you will not be having any other important task and

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plan will work out for you. Look forward to seeing you soon. Best wishes, Saru

Submitted by sarulatha1.g on Tue Apr 21 2020

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