Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does tourism brings more advantages or disadvantages to a country?

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These days, travel has an increasingly vital role to play than ever before, particularly
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the respects of education and experience. In spite of that, many people argue that due to
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the local natural landscape and people’s lives are being interrupted annoyingly.
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, others hold that in the absence of
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our perspective about the world would be theoretical and impractical as Saint Augustine once said: “The world is a book and those who do not travel read only one page.” One argument in favour of
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encouragement is that from an economic standpoint, there would be a significant contribution to the local inhabitants’ source of income as well as the general Gross Domestic Product.
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to say, a greater number of tourists would pay a visit to their place, and the local residents would benefit by providing more food and services to meet the increased demand. As the result,
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expansion would have a positive domino effect on
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other supporting industries as transport and hospitality and
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the whole economic growth. As far as culture and politics are concerned, it is believed that
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promotion is regarded as a practical tool for the government to promote its country’s value and cultural identity.
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, Vietnam had remained less well-known globally until Ha Long Bay, a popular and charming bay in the
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Tonkin, Gulf
of Vietnam, was recognized as a world heritage.
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, in some way, Vietnam is associated with a rich and diverse country in culture with numerous islands and crystal clear sea water.
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, some opponents point out that
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-development would pose a threat to the local ecological system. Some researchers
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that thousands of species are on the verge of extinction due to the fact that more and more buildings, houses and other facilities are being constructed at a rapid rate to supply the growing demand.
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, in turn, would deprive the wildlife from food and living space or lead to the capture of them for food and entertainment.
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, in the aspect of health, there is a risk of transmitting external diseases
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the local country. Take the virus corona pandemic as a typical example. Originating from only Wuhan, China, the virus has swiftly spread all over the globe relentlessly. As a consequence, an enormous number of infected cases and deaths has occurred worldwide so far showing no sign of relief. Taking everything into account, I believe that
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the local destination would suffer one way or another, with the above-mentioned benefits,
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encouragement is becoming more and more necessary as Thanh Hoang says, “the travel and
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industry, it’s just a huge part of our economy”
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