The prevention of health problems and health illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree.

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It is an undeniable fact that the prevention of diseases is better than curing the same. A school of thought believes that the
government
should be funding to take precautionary measures. In my opinion, I strongly agree that there should be an appropriate funding to prevent health issues and illness in people.
To begin
with,
government
should provide an appropriate budget to have cleanliness. It is a know for a fact that untidy or unsanitary places are the cause health issues and diseases often originate from
such
places.
For example
, a
research
conducted by the World Health Organization demonstrated that 90% of the illness in a society is caused by the unhealthy environment.
As a result
of unhealthiness the public living in that area gets infected ad
this
will be spreading rapidly across the nation, which puts a pressure on the
government
.
Secondly
,
government
should invest in
research
. It will help to counter serious and newborn diseases which will prevent health problems and
also
, as treatment of patients is very costly and sometimes they cost a fortune even in
government
hospitals.
For example
, in corona pandemic, many countries failed miserably due to lack of
research
in medical area and the treatment was unmanageable.
Moreover
, Studies in the medical field will definitely boost the country's economy. To conclude, it is necessary to prevent illness, so,
government
Suggestion
the government
should focus on the sanitary conditions and medical
research
.
further
Suggestion
Further
, it will act as security shield against diseases and it will be a lot easier to overcome diseases as there would less number of patients. So, I strongly agree that prevention is better than treatment.
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