These days many people live or work overseas in a different country than they were born in. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and then give your own opinion.

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The
first
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reason for
this
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issue is that science subjects are actually difficult and quite abstract
.
Accept space
.
They require intellectual ability and very hard work. Students have to acquire a large amount of knowledge
theoritically
in a vertical direction
vertically
so that they can work on researches. But in reality, in universities, these subjects are not taught in a right way: too much theory whilst too few practices and
experients
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experiences
experience
. The
second
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is fewer employment opportunities. In some
unprivileged
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countries that
can not
can not
cannot
facilitate science researching financially, learners of
this
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field do not have much
chances
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chance
to work for is as their profession.
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, their
remunaration
something that remunerates
remuneration
when applying for jobs relating to science and technology is quite low.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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