15. You’re interested in a music course that you saw on an advertisement. Write a letter to the club. In your letter, you should: - explain why you’re interested - request more information about the course - talk about your past experiences.
Dear Sir/ Madam.
I am writing
this
letter to show my interest in a music
course
as per an advertisement.
To begin
with, I am extremely fond of music
. Since my childhood, I used to learn music
on different themes. As per your advertisement, this
course
is related to classical music
and I am passionate about it, therefore
, I would like to join it without fail.
However
, I need further
information about a music
course
. I want to know the timing, course
durations and fees. Since I am a working person, I would like to prefer the evening batch. Moreover
, please provide more details related to the tutor as his/her qualifications and experience would definitely be useful in learning the various skills effectively.
In fact, I learnt classical music
at the age of 11 years. Thus
, I am familiar with various techniques. Although
I left the training at the age of 13 due to
my study load, I want to restart again and join this
course
positively.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Your support and cooperation are highly appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
Rob Steave,Submitted by ahv on
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task response
To improve your score further, consider providing a bit more detail about your past experiences with classical music courses. This would enhance the depth of your response.
task response
The letter addresses all parts of the task: explaining interest, requesting information, and discussing past experiences. This is a strong task achievement.
coherence and cohesion
Your letter has a clear and logical structure, making it easy to follow your points. Each paragraph focuses on a single idea, contributing to strong coherence and cohesion.
coherence and cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and polite, showing respect and suitable tone for formal communication.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.