Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is a fact that people are highly exposed to violent scenes in films, which is deemed to have adverse impacts on the public. From my point of view,

such

exposure could foster the social evil,

therefore

it is necessary for governments to implement the regulations to control it.

Firstly

, the high levels of violence in movies have wrought severe damage to the community owing to the fact that the viewers could imitate the actions which they watched. Sometimes, violence brings novel feelings,

therefore

people could be lured by them

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o illustrate

this

case, recent research has shown that 25% of criminals in Vietnam when interviewed said that the killing scenes in movies inspired them to infringe the laws.

Besides

, many children indicate that they suffered severe depression because they were obsessed with

such

scenes and those make them afraid of people around. While these complications are seemingly insurmountable, I believe that the governments could adopt some resolutions to mitigate them.

Firstly

, the authorities could tax

such

films to reduce their popularity in the market.

Moreover

, indeed, there is an effective system to monitor the scenes which will be presented in movies and the violent ones should be cut.

Lastly

, schools must raise students’ awareness about the negative impacts of these films as well as creating n

ew friendly environment

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a new friendly environment

new friendly environments

for children to release the stress.

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Subsequently, all

the aforementioned, I reach a conclusion that violent films cause many problems for both individual and society,

nonetheless

, the government could take steps to untangle them.