Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

The details and knowledge of bringing up the children are very sensitive and have various factors invol
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involvements
such
as parents, cultu
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cultural
social. Altho
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Although
wing kids to make their own decision on every matte
rs has
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matter
a negative impact of selfish thought, I believe there are benefits that outwe
ight the
be heavier than
outweigh
outweighed
drawbacks which I will explain in
this
essay.
Firstly
, permitting children to make their own decision can encourage to stimulate their brain function which lead
to h
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leads
ave an ability of creativity and logic thinking.
For example
, they can choose a proper dress to attend a party.
Secondly
, it
also
allows kids to learn situations and think of consequents by themselves
such
as they know when they do not beware of a step, they will get hurt and a bruise or a wound on their affecting parts.
Finally
, it is important to let them solve a problem by thems
elves which can
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themselves, which
promote their thoug
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the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about
thought
ess and they will grow up effectively.
On the other hand
, I do appreciate some people think that children make their own wishes will lead to a character of selfish. Children are lack of ability to decis
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decide
first
. They may think that they can do whatever that they want particularly when their parents spoil them too much.
Therefore
, in
this
case should be fixed by obser
ve thei
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observing
r behav
iors and
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behaviour
behaviours
give them an appro
piate advi
suitable for a particular person or place or condition etc
appropriate
se. In conclusion, allowing kids to think has various merit
s especially thei
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merits, especially
r occasion to learn by themselves and stimulate their cognitions.
However
, it should be sometimes consider by adults, monitor their behav
ior and
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
give them suitable opinions.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Autonomy
  • Consequence-awareness
  • Self-centered
  • Informal decision-making education
  • Child development
  • Age-appropriate choices
  • Cognitive growth
  • Fostering independence
  • Parental guidance
  • Societal norms
  • Interpersonal consideration
  • Balance of freedom
  • Individualism versus collectivism
  • Experience-based learning
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