Giving detailed information of crime in newspapers and on television has bad consequences. Some suggest that government should impose some restriction on them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In
contemporary era
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the contemporary era
,
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crime
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the crime
has been rapidly
increased
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increasing
. According to some people, either newspaper or television should broadcast full information about
crime
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has created evil impact,
hence
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government
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the government
should impose some limitation on them. I strongly support to
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approach, because it has far more ascendancy than disadvantages.
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,
this
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essay will emphasise my opinion. To commence with, there are plenty of advantages, if
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government restriction
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government restrictions
on
detail
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news about
crime
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in either newspaper or television.
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and foremost, children who will not influence towards
crime
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and they will not obtain any single idea for
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crime
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criminal
activity.
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is to say that some ways like
newspaper
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a newspaper
newspapers
or television stop broadcast
detail
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news about
crime
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like, how to attempt some serious
crime
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by
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of
criminal and so on.
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, children will not get encouragement towards criminal activity and they choose
appropriate way
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an appropriate way
the appropriate way
appropriate ways
for their career.
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,
Dubai where
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Dubai, where
government
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has prohibited on
detail
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news of
crime
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, consequence, their
crime
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rate has
bern
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
been
gradually
drop
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dropping
dropped
down since
last
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few years.
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this
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, one more reason is that criminals are alerted by
detail
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news which view on media.
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is because, due to
media
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the media
, they get all information about
government
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taking all steps against
crime
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activities
;
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;
not only alertness, but
also
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they create
master plan
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a master plan
master plans
the master plan
against new steps which is made by
government
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.
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, it will create
more critical situation
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a more critical situation
more critical situations
for
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government
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the government
and cops.
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, Akshardham terror attack in 2013 when head of
terrorist
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a terrorist
, monitoring all police
position
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positions
by
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of
news channel,
therefore
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3 cops had died in
this
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situation. Henceforth to conclude, above mention all arguments through it is
cristal
a solid formed by the solidification of a chemical and having a highly regular atomic structure
crystal
clear,
government
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should prohibition on broadcasting full information about
crime
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in print media or electronic media. I must say that
this
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approach has far more advantages than
nuisance
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a nuisance
.

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