Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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It is thought by some people that homeschooling is a better way for the improvement of children,

on the other hand

another group believe that going to

school

is crucial for children. In my

opinion homeschooling

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opinion, homeschooling

is a better way,

this

essay will discuss both views in detail. Homeschooling is a better way because children can enjoy their leisure time and they can take classes in their

peoductive

producing or capable of producing (especially abundantly)

productive

predictive

hours while in

school

they have to take classes early in the

morning which

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morning, which

isn't that productive, according to a survey, schools which hold classes after 9 am

have

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having

more active students with higher grades.

On the other hand

the other group can be right in some ways,

school

can be quite helpful for children social skills, they can gain a lot of valuable

expriences

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experience

experiences

although

as a lot of articles have indicated

school

able to

can

cause peer pressure and adolescent drug addiction which are

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the principal character in a work of fiction

agonists

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struggles. Overall, if we can homeschool our children and provide them a healthy atmosphere to communicate with their peers, homeschooling can overrate going to

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of or relating to the most highly developed stage of an earlier civilisation and its culture

classical

schools.

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personalized learning
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flexible schedule
extracurricular activities
safe learning environment
bullying
peer pressure
socialization
diversity awareness
structured environment
discipline
punctuality
resources and facilities
communication skills
teamwork
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