The graph below shows the percentage of urban/suburban and rural households in a European country that had acces between 1999 and 2004.
This
bar graph shows a compilation about
the statistics of rural and urban Change preposition
of
household’s
internet connection in an unreported European country between 1999 and 2004. It is known that Fix the agreement mistake
households’
the
online network and technological devices have been increasing a lot since 1999.
Undoubtedly, there Correct article usage
apply
were
a significant expansion of Change the verb form
was
this
access in both categories. Indeed, discoveries and creations of facilities, devices, and infrastructure opened the opportunity for it. For example
, the large production reduced the prices of the necessary equipment and the chance to
these products Change preposition
for
be
available, including in rural areas.
Fix the infinitive
to be
Furthermore
, the increase in city's
household’s cyberspace approach was bigger than in rural areas, mainly between 1999 and 2003. In 2004, Correct article usage
the city's
the
urban’s access was bigger, but in a less proportion. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, it is easier to install and sell computers and internet network
in big cities and surroundings than in the countryside Fix the agreement mistake
networks
due to
the infrastructure.
Briefly, accordingly
with
the Change preposition
to
graph
there was a valid increment in access of families to cyberspace from 1999 to 2004, mainly in metropolitan areas. Add a comma
,graph
This
intensification might have been explained by the technology development and infrastructure.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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