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Animals are in danger of extinction. Some people say that we should protect only those animals, which are useful to humans. Do you agree or disagree?

#animals #danger #extinction #people #humans
Undoubtedly
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 every
animals
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animal
have
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has
 its own importance in an ecology
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 Some individuals recommend that they must save only those animals
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 which are useful for human
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 I fully disagree with the above statement
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This
 essay on
intend
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intends
 to discuss some idea along with suitable conclusion
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Although
 some animals which does not give any product to an individual
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 they should protect every
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creature
 present on the earth
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 There are several reasons to save animals
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Firstly
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 it
play
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plays
significant role
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a significant role
 in maintaining ecosystem
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 Deer eat grass
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 when it is
die
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dying
then
 it is
convert
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converted
 into phosphate
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This
 formation does not take place until and unless when it is not totally decomposed
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 That phosphate
is accumulate
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is accumulated
has accumulated
accumulates
 in soil and increase
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 fertility
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Moreover
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 after some time grasses
are grow
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grow
are grown
are growing
 due to
natural process
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natural processes
the natural process
a natural process
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this
 way it
help
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helps
 to maintain food chain
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Furthermore
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 in recent news it was said that tiger and lion were out of
forest
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the forest
 because they were unable to get some food in their habitats
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This
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was
has been
major problem
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a major problem
 for people who were living in
near by
close at hand
nearby
 area
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This
 can be solved by protecting every
animals
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animal
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 Meanwhile
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 it
also
 helps some scientists
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in
 knowing medical knowledge by performing some experiments on animals
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 To illustrate
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 Dr Griffith
had make
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had made
host
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the host
a host
 as mice for doing practical
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 He was finding the genetic material for bacteria
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 To conclude
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eventhough
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even though
 some animals which are not beneficial for human directly
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 They have importance in
food chain
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the food chain
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we
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We
 should protect it
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otherwise
 it can
lead major problems
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lead to major problems
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