The maps show the changes of a community center 10 years ago and until the present
The given diagrams highlight the transformation of a public
Use synonyms
center
over the past 10 years. Change the spelling
centre
Overall
, as can be seen from the maps, the period has witnessed dramatic changes in order to meet citizen's Linking Words
need
when going to the community Fix the agreement mistake
needs
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center
.
Over Change the spelling
centre
the
period Correct article usage
apply
time
, the entrance is still located in the southwest of Change preposition
of time
this
place. To the west of Linking Words
this
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center
, the garden was demolished to make way for Change the spelling
centre
the
indoor sports, Correct article usage
apply
whereas
the parking still remained. In the centre of Linking Words
this
community Linking Words
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center
, the Change the spelling
centre
100 seat
hall shows no change over Add a hyphen
100-seat
the
time Correct article usage
apply
while
the toilet was added to the storage in the north of the hall.
On the right-hand side, there were four offices, but now these offices were relocated to the bottom of the hall in order to make a room in the cafe area. In the southeast, the kitchen was kept intact.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words center with synonyms.
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