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Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Nowadays people entertain themselves by watching movies in their spare time. They have become more and more popular in our daily life, so there are many different kinds of films you can choose to watch. I prefer the serious ones, that are designed to make us think.
First
off
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of
 all, serious movies, unlike amusing ones,
give
Suggestion
gives
 us something to think about, there is still something left in our minds
after
Suggestion
over
 a certain period of time. Their main purpose is to encourage us to acquire something valuable and the keep it in mind for a relatively longer period of time.
Furthermore
,
Accept space
,
we can learn a lot of things from
this
 type of movies.
For instance
, if you watch some documentaries about a country, you will learn a lot about the culture and the inhabitants of that country. Documentaries improve your knowledge and level of education, which will help you to be successful in school or study.

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