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We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in term of control and security of information outweighs the advantages. To what extent do you agree?

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In
this
 world of technology today,
although
,
internet
Suggestion
the internet
 is clearly beneficial, but problems associated with its control and security of information are a drawback. In my opinion, I believe that technology along with its brighter side has some flaws too, which are associated with problems like privacy issues and leakage of financial information.
Firstly
, the privacy issues
is
Suggestion
are
 the main problem. As the social networking websites are becoming more popular, so is the threat of leakage of personal data. The sites
such
 as Facebook and Instagram where people post their personal details along with their pictures fall as an easy prey for criminals who can use their identity.
This
 will not only increase a problem for people whose identity is stolen, but for the rest of the community too.
Moreover
, the
internet
 can help criminal to hide by using another person’s material and become a big challenge to seek them.
Secondly
, the other issue which has shaken the financial system is hacking of financial sites. Hacking is one of the prominent problem of using
internet
Suggestion
the internet
 for financial transactions. As online shopping and banking is making their ways on a bigger platform to reach many customers, so is the cyber crime. The financial information related to the credit and debit card is more vulnerable as it is mostly used by many people to pay their bills as well as for shopping, sometimes by registering at unsecured sites unknowingly will lead the customer to lose their financial data which indeed is a lose to people as well as the banks. In conclusion,
although
internet
Suggestion
the internet
 is beneficial, but has its drawbacks too, which is indeed a
set back
an unfortunate happening that hinders or impedes; something that is thwarting or frustrating
setback
.

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