How should we ensure that television is a positive influence in the life of children?
Nowadays, the life is
hustler
and Suggestion
a hustler
bustler
so Suggestion
Bustler
bustle
buster
television
become to play an important role in entertainment. Unexceptionally, parents and their children spend a lot
of time watching television
in order to entertain and get new information. However
, some people suggest that watching television
has a positive effect to viewer in directly
, Suggestion
directing
expecially
children and vice versa.
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
First
of all, children may develope
a creative make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation
develop
imagination though
lively image, music and cartoon on the Accept comma addition
imagination, though
television
. Since the chanels
for children are a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
chance
channel
charnels
desinged
with the appropriate content and the done or made or performed with purpose and intent
designed
funy
tune, they can be easy to enjoy it. arousing or provoking laughter
funny
funky
For instance
, when a child watch the cartoon on the television
, that he or she see some objects which are designed with vivid color
and nice shape by chance stimulates his or her creativity. a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect
colour
colours
Secondly
, on the television
has a lot
of chanels
which help children learn more about official routes of communication
channels
canals
canoes
environment
, animals, plant and even other languages. It is clear that Suggestion
the environment
television
sums up a lot
of knowledge around our life. Hence
, they just observe that things thanks to
watching Suggestion
for
television
without going outside and contacting in direct. . However
, it does not ensure that children may be attacked by some violent or sex images, some chanels
which are not suitable for the age of children. official routes of communication
channels
canoes
chains
Moreover
, in case some people try to create some things in order to attract their attention on their chanel
which contain unsuitable information. a path over which electrical signals can pass
channel
channels
canal
Besides
, if children spend a lot
of their time watching television
, it can affect to their eyesight and they may become passive.
In conclusion, television
may influence on children in both side
. Suggestion
sides
Thus
, parents and schools need to take a control about the program on the television
which are appropriate for children.Submitted by enjatran on
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