Some people argue that space exploration has had more to do with national pride than international effort. To what extent do you agree with this? How do you think space exploration will change in the future?

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From the ancient
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people have been dreaming about
space
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explorations. In the
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century, during the Cold War, most powerful countries had a race and established
space
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programmes independently. Nowadays,
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situation has changed over
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and I believe that the spirit of co-operation made many countries to work together to achieve the highest result.
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, collaborations help to simplify the work.
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, China and North America became partners in terms of
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explorations leaving all pride and distrust behind. With the Chinese advanced technology and the United States significant experience they achieved high results. So it is only a matter of
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before international collaboration in
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exploration becomes a reality. In the same way, some countries already have enough achievements to satisfy its pride and start to create strong partnerships. Since that point, the
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Race has slowed down and agencies have been started to emphasise more on research and analysing with the help of artificial workers
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as robots. Nowadays, quite a few astronauts have risked their lives. How that will change
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exploration is an interesting question. Big capital of programmes, which sponsored by governments, allows agencies
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as NASA, CNSA and Roscosmos to develop more and more advanced spaceships for to overcome fantastic distances. Even small collaborations between the
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world countries will push the boundaries and motivate other regions to join. Having said that, if countries will step over their pride to achieve a higher goal,
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they can achieve extraordinary results in a short
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. Some countries have different strong areas,
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, China has stronger technology. All in all, only
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will tell how everything will change.
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