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To what extent has the Internet made life more convenient? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Nowadays, the most significant concerns of mankind are to improve their living standard and how
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making
 it convenient.
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, some people believe that the
internet
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 plays an influential role in their lives in terms of work and connection while others are concerned about negative impacts of its. I believe that the
internet
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 has both advantages and some severe disadvantages, in
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 essay they are discussed. On the one hand, the
internet
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 is a huge space of containing
information
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.
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, people can get
information
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 which relates to many aspects they want easily by touching the screen of their smart phone or pressing their devices’ button;
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, it helps them save their time.
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, when I prepare a presentation, I often go to the libraries of my school to obtain
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information
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, but thanks to the
internet
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 I may access electric libraries in order to find quickly academic
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 as specialized dictionaries, scientific research, specialist presses;
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, I am not time-consuming to read a lot of books or lectures anymore.
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, it can be appropriate for using an ebook
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 of a printed book in any case.
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, when I am quarantined because of corona virus, I may not go out to buy books, shippers may not
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 deliver books for me as well as;
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 ebooks are the best choice for me.
On the other hand
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, people may be linked personal
information
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 through the
internet
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. When people access a website or a program required to supply their personal
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, hackers may thieve that
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 to make profits, so users may be a
cyberbullying
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 victim.
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, they steal money from bank accounts of customers or create fake accounts to cheat somebody out of money, and they may use private images to blackmail.
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, on the
internet
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 may be contained toxic contents which have negative impacts on awareness of users. Especially, if users are children, that can be extremely dangerous,
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. To sum up, the
internet
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 helps human life become more convenient, and it
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 results in linked private
information
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.
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, users should take advantage of the
internet
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carefully
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careful
care
 so order not to be a
cyberbullying
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 victim.

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