write a descriptive paragraph. You should write a well-structured 200-250-word paragraph.

My favourite
place
in my hometown is al Masjid al Haram in Makkah
also
, called a "Holy
Mosque
". It considers the biggest
mosque
in the world that's why it's able to accommodate a million of worshippers. The holy
mosque
has one of the best Islamic architecture. The floor of the holy
mosque
is different in its quality, it has a special material that makes it cold, even if it’s been hit by the sun, what makes it perfect for the people to walk barefoot on it. The pillars are designed to divide the
mosque
into several areas. When the Muslims look up they are definitely going to impress by domes and luxuries rocks and marble. There are big chandeliers hanging down from the high roof that’s made of copper. The holy
mosque
has its own vintage fan what makes it fit for cold weather and for those people who can’t tolerate the central air condition
such
as old age and babies.The lights on the holy
mosque
is mixed between white and yellow and it's considered as a mark for the central air condition and the fan area. The holy
mosque
is the most important
place
for each Muslims from different countries. Because it has the Kaaba which is a squared building shaped and covered with dark black clothing called Kiswa written on it a Quranic verse brocaded with gold threads,
also
the door is made of pure gold. The holy
mosque
provides holy water “Zamzam” for free for everybody. In conclusion, the holy
mosque
is my favourite
place
as Muslim to worship in it. Being there makes me feel purified and calm.That’s why it is the perfect
place
where all Muslims come every year from all over the world to visit it

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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