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Some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events. Is this a positive or negative trend?

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At the present time, spending a massive amount of money on
lesiure
time available for ease and relaxation
leisure
 activities becomes a very trendy. People have several perspectives regarding
this
 tendency. I would side
by
Suggestion
with
of
 those who offend
this
 trend. One one hand, supporters
illustrate
Suggestion
illustrates
 that
this
 modern behaviour could positively affect the community by giving the outcome of these activities to needed people and charity organization.
For example
, after Catrina tornado in the USA, a numerous number of concerts have been made to support the society by funding both of governmental and private organizations to repair the damages.
Moreover
, the riches have right to spend their fortunate as they want and enjoy the life with their wealth.
On the other hand
, the opponents illustrate that spending a massive amount of wealth on unimportant issues,
such
 as matches, movies, theatre plays and concerts is a waste of money.
Instead
 of supporting these events, wealthy people should turn to aid poors. To illustrate, spending one thousand pounds to feed a needed family would be undoubtedly better that attending matches. In my personal opinion, I totally agree with the opponents and I find the spending insensible amount of wealth
on
Suggestion
of
un
Suggestion
a
an
 useful
activities
Suggestion
activity
 is
irresponable
showing lack of care for consequences
irresponsible
 behaviour. To conclude.
Although
 the trend of spending a lot of cash on entertainment events is thought by some to be beneficial and acceptable. I would support those who believe that disadvantages of
this
 tendency exceed its merits.

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