Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed materials should be used. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is considered by some that exclusive material which is available on the internet is best for a learner, while there are others who choose to dissent (disagreement) and consider traditional methods of using printed material to be the best. In my perspective, these studying methods should be used interchangeably to achieve efficiency. Indeed, both resources are the conspicuous (clear) method trends, which are essential for growth and development of the pupil. To embark upon, Electronics books could be dynamic tools about the resourcefulness of online material. By

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I mean, they provide access to children with a wide range of sources and interactive features to promote language and literacy development within a limited period of time.

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, students could search for websites with no charge

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as Google, Wikipedia and Baidu.

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, frequent use of laptops for study purpose tend to either health hazard which include, shortsightedness and others eyes defect or reason of distraction through amusement application.

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, hard copied stuffs are very efficient in terms of readability and preference.

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is to say that students tend to absorb more when they are reading on paper and they can serve as a point of reference relating an idea collectively among learners.

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, in a survey conducted by school teachers, 89% of students agree to easily assimilate (adopt) and comprehensively (understand) effectively with a printed material. In fact,

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learning methods cannot be affected by technological hassles attached to the use of media. To recapitulate, online studies and simultaneously using text books are vital because of resource availability and comprehensive (complete) reading. I opine that combination of both methods would be an ultimate solution for learners to develop literacy skills.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

283 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

online reading materials
printed materials
advantages
disadvantages
technology
convenience
interactivity
accessibility
visual appeal
physical books
parental guidance
digital skills
screen time
learning experience
personal preference
comprehension
critical thinking
creativity
word recognition
grammar
vocabulary development
reading habits

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