Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think people should be free to choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion
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sports amusing
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essay will discuss why, despite some harm caused, people should still be able to choose extreme sports as their method to channel their Linking Words
passion
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Extreme sports have made many people wary about the safety and condition of the athletes. These types of sports involve activities Use synonyms
such
as punching, jumping from extreme heights, which frequently lead to a major injury, and can be lethal to the athletes. Linking Words
This
is exemplified by the boxers who experience fractured bones or brain damage after years of their participation in the competition. Linking Words
Therefore
, some groups suggest that the prohibition of dangerous sports could lessen the number of people heavily injured.
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However
, despite the harms, the athletes have been aware of the consequence and still choose to undergo dangerous sports. Passions have been the driving factor, as many find adrenaline from doing activities Linking Words
such
as gymnastics, scuba diving, horse riding, challenging and necessary for their life. Linking Words
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, despite breaking some bones or being hospitalized for months, boxers often come back to the ring to fight again as Linking Words
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passion
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Hence
, as long as the athletes have consented to it, these sports should continue because they are essential for the athletes' life.
In conclusion, there are pros and contra to extreme sports. Linking Words
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type of sports career. In my opinion, people should be able to choose the kind of sports that they like to do.Linking Words
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