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Some people choose to eat meat or fish. They believe that is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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It is true that the amount of people who are choosing to eat no
meat
 or fish is increasing nowadays, most of them have decided to follow
this
 type of
diet
 because is beneficial for their own health and for the environment.
Although
 in my view an unbalanced
diet
, eating only vegetables and fruits may have a negative impact on a person’s health. On the one ha
nd most v
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hand, most
egans and vegetarians used to eat beef or fish, but they have decided to convert to
this
 new kind of lifestyle due to some kinds of health problems
such
 as high level of cholesterol because of an excess of red
meat
 in their diets.
By contrast
, It is often claimed that someone who is in his childhood should not follow a vegan or vegetarian
diet
 because they need both animal and vegetable proteins.
On the other hand
 an at
helte n
a person trained to compete in sports
athlete
eeds to reach a specific daily amount of proteins, eating 100 gr
o
a period of time containing 365 (or 366) days
yr
f stake rather than 100 gr
o
a period of time containing 365 (or 366) days
yr
f broccoli he will satisfy his protein requirement faster.
Furthermore
, scientists and dieticians say that animal proteins are es
setial f
absolutely necessary; vitally necessary
essential
or the recovery of an at
helte’s m
Suggestion
athlete’s
u
scles.
Suggestion
muscle
Finally
,
meat
 contains animal fats that are essential for the relief of normal te
stosterone’s l
Suggestion
testosterone
evel in the man’s body.
By contrast
, an excess of
meat
 and especially of red
meat
 in your
diet
 may have a serious impact on a person’s blood analysis. In conclusion, both lifestyles have their pros and cons.
However
, I would recommend to keep following a well-balanced
di
et especially d
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diet, especially
uring the childhood, allowing your body to have a caloric intake represented by all the important sources of proteins, carbohydrates, fats and vitamins.

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