The table below gives information about the languages that high school students speak at home in one district

The table illustrates the data about the languages which are used by secondary students in their houses in one US school district. Overall, Spanish is the most common language while Nepalese shares the least. To describe the information in a few more details, was in the
first
place, accounted for nearly 15,110 speakers in 2008. After that, from 2014, there was a significant rise in student numbers
speaking
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this
language
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with number doubling.At the same time
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Korean and Vietnamese were alike that they were both reducing the number of students.
On the other hand
, it can be seen that unlike Polish, Nepalese numbers increased dramatically
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438 and turned Polish to be the
last
place in 2014.
Similarly
, Chinese and Arabic were simultaneously 4670 and 1320 people whilst Russian represented 1656 students.
However
, we can see that no other languages can beat Spanish as none of them reach
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the fifth of the Spanish.

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