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In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single –sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree?

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Nowadays, in most countries, parents have the opportunity to send their children either to single –sex or coeducational schools,
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, it is considered by some that sending children to single –sex school
has
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will have
 drawbacks in the future. In my opinion, I believe that studying in single-sex school does not have any effect on a child’s future.
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, it enhances
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 specific skills and builds their
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 which is essential later in life.
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,
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 particularly in same
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 school boosts
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 specific skills.These skills are specific to the child’s
gender
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, in girls' schools they are more keen to learn specific skills
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 as crafting, drawing, whereas in boys' schools, boys will be more interested in sports,
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 as swimming, cricket. Theses skills depend on
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 specific interests as well as their physical capacities.
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, learning these skills in schools specifically for girls and boys will prepare for
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 within their own sex. Some children can take these skills as profession later in their lives.
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, same sex schools' boosts
confidence
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 in children. As there are differences in the physical abilities between boys and girls, so judging them in
competition
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 of physical abilities will always lead boys towards winning, the same can be the case with girls as they mature faster than boys so their
competition
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 in class will lead girls.
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, they can lose their
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. Equality is important for
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 as it inculcates fare standards of
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.
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, single sex- schools can boost their
confidence
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 in the long run. In conclusion, single –sex schools does not hinder child’s growth in future
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 enhances their confidences and skills.
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