You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter . explain why you think you would be suitable for the job . say what else you could do for the family . give your reasons for wanting the job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear …………….,

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Dear Monica, I hope

this

letter finds you in radiant health and you are doing well. I am writing

this

letter in response to the advertisement published in the local newspaper about a teacher that you are looking for your children to teach Bangla language for a year. To commence with, I am a suitable person to teach your infant about

Bangla

Correct article usage

the Bangla

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language as I have been living at Park Street in Australia since 2022 which is very convenient for me to travel to your address. I

am not only speak

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am not only speaking

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apply

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Bangla but

also

able to communicate in English fluently which will be helpful for the teacher and the student to ensure the quality learning outcome.

Moreover

, I am able to take care of your school-going children every day as you are engaged with a full-time

job

in a multinational company.

In addition

this

, I am capable of looking after your pet

also

including ensuring their feeding on time.

Furthermore

, I am very keen to have

this

job

because I always enjoy teaching people about the language.

Although

I have been doing a temporary

job

this

town, I will be very happy to have

this

job

for a year with the opportunity of teaching your children

as well as

exploring the local culture. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon regarding

this

matter. Yours faithfully, Clinton

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central idea and transitions smoothly from one idea to the next for enhanced coherence and cohesion.

task achievement

Try to avoid overly general statements. Be specific about how you can contribute to the family's needs and what qualifies you for the role, providing concrete examples of your experiences and skills.

task achievement

Maintain a formal tone throughout the letter. Avoid informal expressions or overly casual language when applying for a job, as it's important to convey professionalism.

coherence cohesion

Ensure your letter has a friendly yet professional greeting and closing. While the current greeting and closing are mostly appropriate, the body of the letter should also reflect this tone.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

231 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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