Immigration has a significant impact on the contemporary society. Each year, more and more people from all over the world decide to leave their home countries and move to another place. In this essay will examine the reasons and the consequences of immigration.

The passage offers a detailed information about the authors’ two most influential musicians’ who are Norah Jones’ and Billie Holiday’ as well as his or her
affectionate
Suggestion
affection
towards them. To start with, despite the fact that Billie Holiday’s background is extremely challenging while Norah Jones’ is advantaged, they both became remarkably well-known and wealthy later in life.
Secondly
, due to their dissimilar life stories, they had very different musical training.
However
, in many ways, their music, performance style and abilities are so alike.
Last
but not least, the author like both of Norah Jones and Billie Holiday since they possess their own unique style in music.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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