Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Parents have been leveraging methods to develop their children. While some believe that children should be taught to be competitive, some prefer to embed cooperation values to their children. In my opinion, from

early age

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an early age

, teaching children to become more collaborative than competing with their friends. Children are often raised to be competitive to prepare them for their future. They believe that children should be aware with the race in the workforce from

younger age

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a younger age

younger ages

,

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, they can compete and obtain a job after they graduate university, and

finally

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become successful.

For instance

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, many parents in China enlist their children to take piano lesson and to join

competition

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a competition

to raise the competitive side of their beloved ones.

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often times leads the children to be ambitious and many examples indicate that these children succeed in achieving their goals, because they have tendency to go extra miles.

On the contrary

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, many parents choose to raise

child

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a child

children

the child

with cooperation and partnership values. They believe that these values are more important, as the children will have kind hearts and can work in a team, as it is the skill required for every professional occupation. As an example, parents in the United States put their children in scout teams to teach them how

to do

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doing

team work, learn how to compromise and how to grow empathy.

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, children will have no difficulty in blending in with anyone and can be respected even better once they are an adult. In conclusion, it is believed by many that children should be

competitive

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competitively

from

younger age

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a younger age

younger ages

, while many argue the

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.

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In

my opinion, the values of collaboration are more beneficial in

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era,

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children should be encouraged to collaborate more than to compete.