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Some people choose to eat meat or fish. They believe that is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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It is true that the amount of people who are choosing to eat no
meat
 or fish is increasing nowadays, thinking that
this
 type of
diet
 is beneficial for their own health and for the environment.
Although
 in my view an unbalanced
diet
, eating only vegetables and fruits may have a negative impact on a person’s health. On the one hand, most vegans and vegetarians used to eat beef or fish, but they have decided to convert to
this
 new kind of lifestyle because of high blood cholesterol levels caused by an excess of red
meat
 in their diets.
On the contrary
, It is often claimed that during early and middle childhood people should not follow a vegan or vegetarian
diet
 because they need both animal and vegetable proteins.
On the other hand
, an athlete needs to reach a specific daily amount of proteins, eating 100
gr
a period of time containing 365 (or 366) days
yr
 of stake or salmon rather than 100
gr
a period of time containing 365 (or 366) days
yr
 of broccoli he will satisfy his protein requirement faster.
Furthermore
, scientists and dieticians say that for a gym-goer animal proteins are essential to speed up muscle recovery.
Finally
,
meat
 contains animal fats that are essential for the relief of normal testosterone levels in the man’s body.
By contrast
, an excess of red
meat
 in your
diet
 may have a negative outcome. Having discussed both sides of view, evaluating their pros and cons, I believe that following a well-balanced
diet especially
Accept comma addition
diet, especially
 during childhood is extremely important, allowing your body to have a caloric intake represented by all the most important macronutrients
such
 as proteins, carbohydrates, fats and vitamins.
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