People often do not interact with their neighbours and this is harmful community. What are possible cause and solution.

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contemporary era
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the contemporary era
,
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,
mostly individual
are
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do not mingle with their nearest resident because they
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are think
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think
are thinking
are thought
that those
are
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harmful community. To embark on
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,
there
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are
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is
plethora reason why people
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are do not interact
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don't interact
are not interacting
aren't interacting
do not interact
are not interacted
aren't interacted
with neighbours
first
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of all
,
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,
in competitions
era mostly
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era, mostly
people
are
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occupied to enhance the
skill therfor
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skill, therefore
skill therefore
those
are
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endeavours
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endeavouring
for
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to
go forward from
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
people due to
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,
they have not adequate time for communication with another one
hence
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those
are
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hardly
attach
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attached
with their closest natives
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.
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for
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For
instance, maturity of scientific and expert consider that mostly overseas natives
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are give
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are giving
are given
much paramount to the
work therfor
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work, therefore
work therefore
they
are
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less show interest in the adjacent
.
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furthermore
in addition
Furthermore
,
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,
due to
,
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,
dearth of reliable people do not time spend with nearby resident because they feel
insecurity
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insecure
from stranger person
therfor
(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
therefore
those
are
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not
negotiation
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a negotiation
with
neighbour
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a neighbour
neighbours
.
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, parents
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are assume
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assume
are assuming
are assumed
that adjacent
are
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extend
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extending
the offence
hence
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the guidance keep far
to
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for
with
their own kids from another teenager.
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such
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Such
as periodically interference
.
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.
Apart from
,
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,
community
are
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know
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known
about time is
very precious thing
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a very precious thing, hence
a very precious thing hence
hence
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they
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are do not want
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do not want
don't want
are not wanting
are not wanted
aren't wanted
aren't wanting
have not wanted
roaming outside without any valid reason. They
are
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would like stay in their home rather than visit outside. The Government is
indispencible play role
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an indispensable play role
indispensable play role
in tackle of social distancing
hence
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authority should be make regulation or norms to people
assemblance
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.
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firstly
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Firstly
,
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,
bureaucracy
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the bureaucracy
must be establish the
play ground
an area where many people go for recreation
playground
and park for
public
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the public
whichwith
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which with
they can
rid
sit and travel on the back of animal, usually while controlling its motions
ride
read
the distance.
another
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Another
world, elder people can morning and evening with
neibours
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
newborns
as well as adult can play the games with nearest friends
.
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.
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furthermore
in addition
Furthermore
, government should be organise the skill centre
whichin
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which in
each individual can together participate as well as surge the coordination
.
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.
To sum
up
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up, although
although
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bunch
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a bunch
of people
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are do not interact
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doesn't interact
with
neighbour
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a neighbour
the neighbour
neighbours
but government should be organise the skill centre as well as communication
whichwith
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which with
people will incorporate in
these event
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this event
these events
or centre

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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