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Nowadays university education is considered very important for people's future. However, there are a lot of successful people who didn't get higher education.

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First
 of all, the figure shows the total of men and women in
further
education
 in Britain in three periods. The
sum
 of the
sum
 of
people
Suggestion
the people
 who were studying full-time were less than 600 thousands in any period,
in contrast
, the
sum
 of the people who were studying part-time were larger than 1600 thousands in any period.
As a result
 of
this
 information, there were larger than 1000 thousand people studying part-time over full-time in any period.
Moreover
, the
sum
 of people studying part-time was increasing over the periods,
for example
, the number of people studying part-time were larger in 1990
/
1991 than in 1980
/
1981. In the same way happened to full-time
education
 in females.
However
, the total of males studying full-time
education
 decreased,
for example
, the total of males studying part-time was smaller in 1990
/
91 than in 1970
/
71. To
sum
 up, there were more people studying part-time
education
 than full-time
education
. In general, the
sum
 of people studying were increasing,
besides
 in the beginning the females were less than males the percentage was reverted as time goes by, and in 1990
/
91 there were more females studying than males.

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