--DELETED LINK-- The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each category from five organisations.

The data sources clearly

communicates

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the proportion of money that five

organizations

invested in four different categories (machinery, building, staff training and research).

Overall

,

organization

B's invested the most

on

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these categories compared to the others,

while

the ratio for

organizations

D and

E

saw the opposite trend.

In addition

,

organization

C's expenditure was the most different from the other ones. Looking at

organizations

A, D and

E

, we can see that these

organizations

allocated the most

on

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building

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the building

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sector, at around 1,5

billion

euros

for group A and the same figure for

group

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D and

E

( roughly 1

billion

euros

). The least invested categories in

organizations

D and

E

was

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research, the figures for them accounted for 0,6 and nearly 0,7

billions

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euros

for each,

while

that of group A made up approximately 1.1

billion

euros

.

Turing

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to the two remaining countries,

while

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the largest

investment

of

organization

B went to staff training with nearly 1,9

billion

euros

, which

was

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doubled the

investment

for

this

sector in

organization

C (only 0.8

billion

euros

). Around 1.3

billion

euros

used

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for the machinery and research

investment

, which was

also

the highest

investment

in

organization

C,

while

this

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figure for

organization

B for

these sector

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this sector

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were 1,6 and only 0,9

billion

euros

.