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These data sources clearly communicates the values of clothing
export
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to three natio
ns Colombia, Jap
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nations, Colombia
an and
Myanmar
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over the period of 4 years. Overall, while there was an uptrend in the statistics of the
export
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to Colombia and
Myanmar
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, a downward trend could be seen in the Japan's
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,
Myanmar
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is the only nation had a dramatic fluctuation.   In 1999, the
export
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earning from Japan made up around 580 millions of dollars, compared to Colombia and
Myanmar
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, which were 460 billions of dollars and only 10 millions of dollars respectively. In the
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year, the values of
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to
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e by nearly 800 millions of dollars over a year, while Japan's
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had a slight lull at 530 milli
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From 2000 to 2003, the
export
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values of
Myanmar
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continuously increased and reached a peak at roughly 930 millions of dollars in 2001 before hit a
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ons in 2
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002. Colombia had a gradual climb, with the
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reaching 700 millions of dollars before standing at around 600 millions of dollars in the end of the period. The
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for Japan's
export
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earning fell steadily, with the
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standing at under 500 millions of dollars in 2003.
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