Nowadays, most large companies operate multi-nationally. To what extent those companies should have responsibility towards local communities in which they operate?

In recent years, there has been a trend of large corporations to expand their branches offshore.
Although
Suggestion
Despite
making profits is their initial aim, the sake of the native country should
also
be focused on.
First
of all, the foreign companies must have some contribution to the society.
This
could be done by providing the working opportunities for the locals and
also
treat them equally.
For example
, the companies should offer a sufficient amount of salary for the workers to ensure their lives’ qualities and of course, exploited labour is always being avoided.
Moreover
, the multinational companies, especially selling companies, should
also
take into account that social contribution can improve the companies’ reputation. By helping the society, more and more people will acknowledge the companies and trust the products,
therefore
the companies’ income will increase as well.
Secondly
, another aspect which any multinational firms should emphasize on is the local environment. They have to make sure that none of their waste will damage the local environment. To be more specific, they have to decontaminate the chemical waste before dumping it into the sewages, or purify the gas before releasing it into the air,
therefore
the water and the air will not be polluted.
In addition
, the companies must have a suitable plan for using the local natural resources. Without a plan, these companies could easily use up all the resources and the local environment will be badly affected. In conclusion, all multinational companies should always have social responsibility, especially in the local community.

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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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