The picture bellow show how tomotoes ketchup is made.

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The picture reveals the step involved in making tomato ketchup. There are 15 stages in the given picture, from picking tomatoes to joy with hamburger and fires. The
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step is that tomatoes being picked and put into the basket, and
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, workers sort good and bad tomatoes. After being sorted, tomatoes are sent to factory via special car. In a factory, before tomatoes being put into containers, their stake and seeds remote from it, and
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its skin. The following step is that they make a crushing with the press. At
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point add some sugar, vinegar and salt to being crushed tomatoes. And they boil on fire, of course, container's hop clothing condition. And
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shallow to in a bottle, which is ready sources. In order to deliver them to the supermarket,
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of all, they being labelled.
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, stage their qualities are controlled by factory staffs. Following
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put into the boxes with the norm. After that the boxes are delivered to supermarket in special van.
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, you can buy them in order to consume, particularly, consumption with hamburger and fires, it is joy, isn't it?
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