News Media is more influential nowadays and some people think it is a negative development. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays worldwide

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Nowadays, worldwide

people are facing problems from increasing

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and pollution. Some people argue that only

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should be held responsible to minimize

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problem. But

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

group of individual says that every person is accountable for it and should

do

engage in

make

efforts

together solve

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together to solve this problem

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problem. We will discuss here the benefits and drawback of

helding

the act of retaining something

holding

government

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solely responsible for

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. To start with I would say both the problems are interrelated to each other. With the increased numbers of

vehicles these

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vehicles, these

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day's

day

airborne pollution has

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increased. In a recent

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survey, 20000

new motor cars

are coming

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come

on roads every day. So we can imagine the increased amount of

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and pollution. Undoubtedly

Government

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has the power to enforce certain laws and rules which can result in positive outcomes for

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situation.

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example we

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example, we

saw

odd even

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odd, even

policy introduced in Delhi

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year. Though

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step was criticized by a lot of

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people, but

statistics showed reduced numbers of

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jams and better quality of air index in Delhi for that period.

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However along

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However, along

with

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government individual

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government, individual

efforts in

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direction can produce better fruitful results. In that way it would be more effective and productive. People can choose to use public transport like buses and metros for their

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commute, which

will significantly reduce the numbers of vehicles.

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, they can

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use

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to decrease the

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. People should

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follow the

traffic

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guidelines. Abiding the

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rules as well will help in reducing the numbers of jams on the roads. In conclusion, the benefits

outweighs

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outweigh

the drawbacks as it is the duty of the

government

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to have strict measures to control

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kind of problems. The said objectives can be achieved by the

enforceability

the quality of not being doable

infeasibility

of law in a

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hasty

manner.