News Media is more influential nowadays and some people think it is a negative development. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Nowadays, worldwide
traffic
and pollution. Some people argue that only government
should be held responsible to minimize this
problem. But other
group of individual says that every person is accountable for it and should any of various alternatives; some other
another
do
efforts engage in
make
together solve
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together to solve this problem
this
problem. We will discuss here the benefits and drawback of helding
the act of retaining something
holding
government
solely responsible for this
.
To start with I would say both the problems are interrelated to each other. With the increased numbers of vehicles these
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days
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are coming
on roads every day. So we can imagine the increased amount of Suggestion
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traffic
and pollution. Undoubtedly Government
has the power to enforce certain laws and rules which can result in positive outcomes for this
situation. For
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last
year. Though this
step was criticized by a lot of people but
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people, but
traffic
jams and better quality of air index in Delhi for that period.
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government, individual
this
direction can produce better fruitful results. In that way it would be more effective and productive. People can choose to use public transport like buses and metros for their commute which
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commute, which
Furthermore
, they can also
use carpooling
to decrease the traffic
. People should also
follow the traffic
guidelines. Abiding the traffic
rules as well will help in reducing the numbers of jams on the roads.
In conclusion, the benefits outweighs
the drawbacks as it is the duty of the Suggestion
outweigh
government
to have strict measures to control this
kind of problems. The said objectives can be achieved by the enforceability
of law in a the quality of not being doable
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