You are working in an international company, write a letter to inform your manager about your resignation. In your letter, you should: • thank the company for the opportunity that you joined it • tell the reason for your resignation • confirm the time you are leaving

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter concerning my resignation from the company.

Firstly

, it has been a privilege working as a general manager of

this

company. I could not thank

enough

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you enough

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for what

this

job has offered me. I deeply appreciate all the knowledge that I have gained throughout, and

also

the overall experience is unsurpassed. The main purpose for my resignation is that I have planned to foment my own company.

Furthermore

, I have rented a workplace at India bulls, Lower Parel, and

also

hired fewer people.

Moreover

, I will focus more on small scale projects at the start to avoid any risks and gather information. It has always been my dream to

start-up

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start up

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my own venture in

this

field after a certain amount of time and experience. The tentative date would be the 20th of May, but after completely analysing my situation, I have decided the 15th of May 2020 would be appropriate. I hope you would consider my application. Thanking you, Yours sincerely, Shakib Qureshi.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

169 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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