You are working in an international company, write a letter to inform your manager about your resignation. In your letter, you should: • thank the company for the opportunity that you joined it • tell the reason for your resignation • confirm the time you are leaving

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter concerning my resignation from the company.

Firstly

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, it has been a privilege working as a general manager of

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company. I could not thank

enough

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for what

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job has offered me. I deeply appreciate all the knowledge that I have gained throughout, and

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the overall experience is unsurpassed. The main purpose for my resignation is that I have planned to foment my own company.

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, I have rented a workplace at India bulls, Lower Parel, and

also

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hired fewer people.

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, I will focus more on small scale projects at the start to avoid any risks and gather information. It has always been my dream to

start-up

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my own venture in

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field after a certain amount of time and experience. The tentative date would be the 20th of May, but after completely analysing my situation, I have decided the 15th of May 2020 would be appropriate. I hope you would consider my application. Thanking you, Yours sincerely, Shakib Qureshi.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

169 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.

People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?

Now a days many people choose to be self employed, rather than to work for a company or an organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of self employment