These days, many people are interested in buying organic food even though it is often more expensive than conventionally produced food. What are some reasons that people prefer organic food? Do you think it is important to buy organic food despite the higher prices? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, organic foods are becoming more popular among people because of its benefits. Some people would like to eat organic
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food regardless
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food, regardless
of their price while some other people choose conventional
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. In my view, I believe that organic
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is worth to pay
extra cost
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the extra cost
. Some people would rather eat conventional
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for their routine meals. The most obvious reason is that most conventional foods are to some extent cheap and people with low income can afford to buy them.
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, organic
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or genetically modified free fruits are more expensive than conventional fruits. An additional reason is that conventional
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is easy to access due to there are several places
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as convenience stores and shopping malls within towns.
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, several people prefer to buy organic
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. The most significant justification to be taken into consideration is that organic
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is healthier and it doesn’t cause any side effects on people’s health.
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, Japanese people with
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life have mentioned the organic foods are a major factor in their longevity. A
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justification to support the view is that organic
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has natural taste and shape which people would like to taste the original flavour of their foods. Personally, I think on the one hand, organic foods are more expensive and people cannot afford to buy,
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, organic
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is nutritious and keeps the body healthy. In conclusion,
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conventional
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is cheap and most people can buy, it damages people’s health. In my opinion, I think that people who eat organic
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won't encounter with various diseases in their old age as well as no need to pay for their treatment.

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