Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter: say in general what you like about shopping in your area say what is wrong with the facilities suggest how they can be improved

Dear Sir/Mam, I am writing
this
letter to bring your attention to
Greater
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the Greater
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Kailash M block market where I frequently visit to shop. The market has all the major brands which
makes
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make
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it shoppers
one stop
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. There are,
however
, there are a number of areas which require improvement
to begin
with the parking space is small in comparison to the number of visitors, especially on weekends.
Moreover
, vegetable & meat shop in between the shopping field which makes the shopping experience unpleasant. Cleanliness is
also
another major concern, I think it would be better if the council could build multilevel parking in place of the present parking space.
Also
, if they can move vegetable & meat shops outside the shopping range, which in return attract more shoppers. I will appreciate
if
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you share my feedback with the concerned authorities and publish
this
information in your newspaper. Thanks for your support. I look forward to hearing from you Yours Faithfully Bhavna Malik
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  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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