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Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantages and disadvantages of such choice?

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In today’s modern world prepared meal is chosen by the majority of people and they would rather not to cook at home. In my opinion, it occurs because of our busy way of life. Ordering a ready-made meal may reduce the period to prepare the meal for ourselves.
However
,
this
 type of meal may not be nutritious and it can be fast
food
, which is harmful for our health.
First
 and foremost, people desire to save some by not having to cook. Increasingly, our life has become more and more engaged due to the fact that overwork.
Thus
, we don’t want to spend our moment in order to make some meal. Without doubt, it will be quite beneficial for our work and
therefore
 we will have some term from ordering a ready-made meal.
For example
, people use
this
 saved point to carry out new projects or they can do things which they cannot do at work. As to why, prepared meals can be advantageous for the work of people.
On the other hand
, most of prepared meals are convenience feed, that has not many of the vitamins essential to health.
For instance
, people order prepared
food
such
 as: hamburger, hot dog, as well as pizza and Mexican tacos and so on. As I know, these meals considered to be fast
food
 and
also
 they are known to be high in cholesterol, which can be a contributory factor in heart disease.
That is
 why, we have to try to prepare meals ourselves and it must be nourishing
food
.
Last
 but not least, ordering repast from restaurants may be extremely useful for a busy person who has no for cooking, but, as I have above mentioned that we pay attention that it has cons, which is harmless for our health.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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