Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter: say in general what you like about shopping in your area say what is wrong with the facilities suggest how they can be improved

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Dear Sir/Mam, I am writing

this

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letter to express my opinion on the decreasing eminence of

Greater

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the Greater

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Kailash M block market where.Substantially, International shopping brands and stupendous restaurants since I visit frequently, which makes it a top place for shopping and popular among international tourists. There are,

however

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, in my

opinion

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has areas of advancements due to various reasons.

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, limited parking space, due to the

increase

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increasing

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number of vehicle parking

space

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has become a major challenge

especially

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weekend

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. Regrettably, the cleanliness and hygiene of public convenience have been disappointingly deleterious. As I am aware that your newspaper is widely read and if you run a poll you will get the real feedback.

Also

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, I would like to share my suggestions for

the

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apply

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improvement,

such

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as authorities should construct multilevel parking which will increase the vehicle parking capacity.

Finally

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the

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number of public convenience staff should be increased to maintain hygiene & cleanliness along with shift roster and should be strictly supervised. I will appreciate

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it if

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you publish an editorial and refining

shopping

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the shopping

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experience. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Bhavna Malik

bhavnaSat Apr 25 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

185 words

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Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter: say in general what you like about shopping in your area say what is wrong with the facilities suggest how they can be improved

Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

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The best way to motivate employees is to increase their salary. Do you agree with this statement? Are there other ways to encourage employees to work better?

Crime rates will fall as advances in technology make it easier to detect and prevent crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does this shortage caouse? what measures could be taken to overcome these poblems?