Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter: say in general what you like about shopping in your area say what is wrong with the facilities suggest how they can be improved

Dear Sir/Mam, I am writing

this

letter to express my opinion on the decreasing eminence of

Greater

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the Greater

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Kailash M block market where.Substantially, International shopping brands and stupendous restaurants since I visit frequently, which makes it a top place for shopping and popular among international tourists. There are,

however

, in my

opinion

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,opinion

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has areas of advancements due to various reasons.

Firstly

, limited parking space, due to the

increase

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increasing

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number of vehicle parking

space

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spaces

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has become a major challenge

especially

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,especially

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weekend

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weekends

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. Regrettably, the cleanliness and hygiene of public convenience have been disappointingly deleterious. As I am aware that your newspaper is widely read and if you run a poll you will get the real feedback.

Also

, I would like to share my suggestions for

the

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apply

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improvement,

such

as authorities should construct multilevel parking which will increase the vehicle parking capacity.

Finally

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the

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number of public convenience staff should be increased to maintain hygiene & cleanliness along with shift roster and should be strictly supervised. I will appreciate

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it if

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you publish an editorial and refining

shopping

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the shopping

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experience. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Bhavna Malik

Submitted by bhavna on Sat Apr 25 2020

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10Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

185 words

6.00

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter: say in general what you like about shopping in your area say what is wrong with the facilities suggest how they can be improved

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