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All children should be given a free laptop when they start high school. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some believe that every pupil entering secondary school should be gifted a free of charge laptop. I disagree with
this
 because some children can afford to buy their own and the government cannot afford to do so. Those from wealthy families should not be given a complimentary
computer
a machine for performing calculations automatically
Computer
.
This
 would not be fair as
this
 would result in money being taken away from poorer juveniles to give it to people who already have enough. If
this
 proposed scheme was done on a means-tested basis, rich kids would not get anything and
this
 capital could be diverted to those in
more need
Suggestion
most need
.
For example
, in the United Kingdom, children whose parents are on state benefits receive subsidised school dinners but those with working parents do not. The state would
also
 find it extremely difficult to finance
such
 an initiative. The Education Department, like every other government department, has a limited budget, and if funds were spent on laptops, they would have to be diverted from other more worthy areas,
such
 as staff.
This
 would mean that class sizes would have to increase since the budget would not be available for teachers, or even the classrooms themselves.
For instance
, most classes in
developed
Suggestion
developing
 countries have more than 30 in them because of the lack of budget for qualified teachers and teaching assistants. In conclusion, all freshmen starting high school should not be given a free laptop because
this
 would not be fair
on
Suggestion
to
for
 poorer students and there is not enough money for
this
 project.
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