In your opinion, what incentives could be offered that would persuade more people to embrace electric cars? Support your answer with reasons and examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • incentives
  • embrace
  • electric vehicles (EVs)
  • government rebates
  • tax incentives
  • financially appealing
  • charging stations
  • range anxiety
  • public awareness campaigns
  • environmental benefits
  • green mindset
  • partnerships
  • innovative
  • car-sharing programs
  • ownership costs
  • transitional fleets
  • trust and reliability
  • loan and leasing options
  • accessible
  • broader audience
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