Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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These days the curriculum of schools is one of the controversial issues. While it is often said that students should study

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in their schools, others feel that there are more important lessons

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and science in comparison with the

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that students should pass. In

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essay, I will examine both sides of

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argument and provide my opinion. On the one hand, there a number of reasons why some people think that

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is a compulsory lesson for pupils.

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of all, studying

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raises student's awareness about their ancestors, their culture, events which happened in the past, difficulties that people faced with and their real-life story

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in critical situations

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as wars in previous years.

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knowledge can prevent people from repeating mistakes that were made in the past.

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, many countries learned from the

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of China that one of the most important ways which protect people from getting some diseases

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as the Corona Virus is social distancing according to the fact that China could conquer

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virus.

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, many people believe that teaching

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and science is more urgent compared with

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is mainly because memorizing dates, years of events, and names waste the student's time and energy which is not useful for their future. Today's students should spend most of their time on

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that is

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growing fast and life would be hard without adaptation with technological development.

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cannot help pupils to overcome their today's difficulties. In conclusion,

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is important for students, I am of the opinion that learning science and

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is more useful than

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

278 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Cultural heritage
Historical perspective
Analytical skills
Contextual understanding
Technological advancements
STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
Innovation
Interdisciplinary
Job market
Climate crisis
Cultural identity
Critical thinking
Humanities
Contemporary issues
Integration
Tech-savvy

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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

The users of social media, such as Facebook, Twitter, are replacing face-to-face contact in this century. Do you think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvatages?

Some say that music, art, and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

In some developing countries it is difficult to recruit teachers to work in remote and rural areas and this can have a serious impact on education in these regions. Why do many teachers not want to work in these areas? What can be done to encourage teachers to take up posts in these regions?

Some peole say that too much time and resources are spent on the protections of wild animmals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that with the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, people lose the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?