Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development?

The internet technology becomes an integral part of every human
beings
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being's
life.
Nowadays online
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Nowadays, online
courses are replacing the face classes in the territory
education
.
according
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According
to my point of view, there are many benefits of online 
study
 and a few drawbacks. I will elaborate it in the following paragraphs. The
first
and foremost merit of online
education
is convenient because if one learner has started an online 
course 
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course, then
then
he can able to do a
study
in a very flexible way. Due to
this
, he can complete his other home tasks with
education
.
the
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The
students can collect their
study
materials through internet big sitting just at the house.
as
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As
a result of it, their independent
study
skill is developed inefficient aspect.
secondly
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Secondly
, online learning becomes very helpful for
old
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the older
older
aged mankind.
sometimes
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Sometimes
, many people could not have completed their
education
due to some reasons, but now they can do there is a completed
study
by the difference of
cast
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the cast
, age, creeds and so on. Despite its advantages, the foremost disadvantage of online
education
is less direct interaction between teacher and learners through
this
, students get less opportunity of face to face contact with their trainer.
they
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They
just rely on written communication
such
as comments, views, live chat and so on. Apart from it, pupils get insufficient contact with their peers.
This
problem can become
cause
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a cause
causes
of lack of motivation and exchange of different ideas with each other.
for
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For
instance, the students get various
assignment
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assignments
as
project
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a project
,
then
they discuss about all
thee
definite article
the
these
 things in a
group and sometimes,
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group, and sometimes
when they are having coffee in a cafe as
well so,
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well, so this
this
is not possible in real time
study
. To Conclude, an online
study
has few
demerits but
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demerits, but
it is a positive development in our society, perhaps, through
this
online
education
, one person’s desire of
further
learning can be fulfilled which he could not do in his past time.
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